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written by spaceboy90 , June 28, 2007

I really liked it, but during the chorus you should try not to skip from a higher octave to a lower octave.

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written by EasternMind , June 28, 2007

I liked it! Especially the trippy ending effects.

my critique
written by prequarius , June 28, 2007

the feel was pumpkins if thats what you were going for. i especially liked the effects played in the background. very machina though, not mellon collie. i have to disagree spaceboy90's critiue on the whole high pitch then going lower pitch during the chorus. it was a great attempt in the song. the only thing i have to complain about is the lack of singing talent, but that's not what i like discussing. it was a fair attempt, played nicely and the drums dodnt sound all that bad for a drum machine or what ever program you were using. good job in general. if i were to redo this song, i'd get a girl to sing this song with you to do the highs. (i'm thinking of a duet like "...said sadly" in mind) i enjoyed that the bass was dominant in the song, not muffled out at all... but then again many might not like that sort of thing.

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written by Guest , July 19, 2007

buenisimoooooooooo(Y)

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written by prelude3point0 , August 11, 2007

..thats a v.good cover,like it lots,well done ;o)